Viral Marketing Scavenger Hunt

So … I am extremely frustrated … to think I have been messing with video programs and design programs for years now, but for some reason when I use iMovie I run into all sorts of problems and headaches. I also ran into problems with the hired talent not being able to sit still and look at the camera (3 year olds) … so after many many hours of taking pictures & editing video, I finally came up with a video I am somewhat happy with. I would Appreciate any feedback you can give me as I always am looking to improve in anything I do.